So, tonight, after spending a bit of time discovering more and new artists on youtube - I finished up another version of this line art. I'm pleased with them too. One of them has one lineweight and works against the text pretty well, and the other has two weights and does better as a print, says I. Both, can be purchased at Society6!
Here - (https://society6.com/peterpullen/prints)
I wanted to try color with these, but now that I see them like this, I don't think color will necessarily be an improvement. Maybe it will after I sleep.